Synjazz
L. Edgar Otto 04 October, 2013
(for Friday prompt at the imaginary gardens)
The universe cannot be described only by
its cyclic bouts of epilepsy or mystery of memory
Nor without feeling all, the sum total, the Omnium
be more than a phantom aura beyond the flickering light
Induced into epiphanies of perception or
catatonic coma to stop short circuits, blowing the fuse
You who said there was not a theory of everything yet
imposed your chains of virtual totalities on others
have come late to the game in your one room old school
Perhaps you do not believe in magic or moral law above
but have you not seen the variegated universe within you?
* * *
Some hold a central place, only the higher angles to face
what beyond it is but half Adam's face beholding God
Or in the numbers game, grinding lens or making potions
tinkering with nature's sea-foam taffy steel simple machines
So cleaver that in the end philosophers can build the lever
that can lift the world, measure Earth by our axioms and runes
Or that gated cathedral space ship an endless array to which
all paths in the endless beach and plane yellow brick roads
we come home, time walk outside a canvass of our visions
The peach that was the embryo of your soul sorting errors
fetal dreams of birth to come then more beyond night terrors
* * *
Arise! my child of Earth, the fall persists, the grays, the nothingness,
colors greater than Aurora's sources in our sky
Blinded by our own light or walls against the stars, doubt our worth
so choose if our world ends in a flood or fires
The rim of your volcano sleeps beside me multiple fits, starts
my once fire cracker then gets to the how to find the why
That we lose ourselves in the drinking, probing the Big Bang
drakes and damsels together for a season in groups to hang
migrate to the depth of stars enticing us with their wares
Can the thinkers find themselves deep toward nature's womb,
can also blind fainting fem fatal rolling eyes find otherwise?
* * * * *
This is a fantastic piece of writing. I especially love "have you not seen the variegated universe within you?" Beautiful and profound.
ReplyDeleteSherry already mentioned my favorite line, and I agree it is beautiful. I also like "the embryo of your soul" and "imposed your chains of virtual totalities on others".
ReplyDeleteThis prompt has taken you farther than it would take one who is not a poet-philosopher.
And thank you for your comment on my post. I love being mentioned in the same comment as John Steinbeck!
K
Must is be either/or? It seems a false duality to me. I like your comparison of mind to universe in the first section.
ReplyDeleteYou are probably right, it does not necessarily have to be that is angels or angles or something in between, and/or logically not at all. But not sure which either/or you mean... I think it depends on which side of a duality one is one- the philosophic emphasis or the scientific one... I don't know everything. I do cherish the depth of your reply... thank you poetess...
DeleteJust like Ken Wilber says in his A Theory of Everything, this one has depth and span neatly tied up with a quantum christmas bow. I love it when someone can propose their philosophical ideas this clearly in a poem. Its like concentrating words and stuffing them in a small bottle and when the time comes to open....BAM!!! Great writing and thought process. thanks for coming over.
ReplyDeleteMy roommate a couple of years ago was into Ken Wilbur and I read all his books he starting as a dishwasher like me... While his system only went so far before becoming something more in the attempt to reconcile things like postmodernism with the rest of social ideas... I deliberately use his terms depth and span as that came closest to how I divided up planes and processes in geometry. Thanks.
Deletecan they find themselves? who the hell knows.
DeleteYes, Marian...new experiences, in and out of pain, in or out of sleep... giving ourselves by losing ourselves... the tightrope that is between awake and sleep... that special tightrope walking we should define as woman... the last line is where the author and the reader reach an end to what is known...in this sense you if not all poets are philosophers as well :-)
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